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Do you see this body
With etched on lines framing my eyes
When I smile
Or frown
This extra luggage
Around my middle weighing me down
Pounds of flesh
Wide platypus feet
Gray that I try to hide
The windows of my soul are grimy
Teeth that are stained from too many cigarettes
And coffee
Hair that is chopped off short
So that I look like a boy
An eyebrow ring
Tattoos
See me
Not conforming
To a society that is starched white
With pleats
I am woman
I spit at injustice
Hear the voice that I speak
It comes from many years on this earth
I am more than this body
There is no truth to an unkind justice
Do not be blind
Speak from your inner voice
The silence is loud
It is also unassuming
You are at the right place in time
There is only this moment
You and I are more than just a body
We have purpose
And dignity
We can lie awake in the darkness
Counting blessings
It is much better than sheep
We can wake up from this sleep
And be aware
That we are not alone
And loneliness is an adversary
We can fight it
Find solitude in the quiet
:iconchewyraezen:
more than a body.......
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Mood: Love ~KikiElric Sep 7, 2012  Student General Artist
yes, more than a body, a beautiful soul that shines. you are a wonderful person and your writing is breathtaking! ^_^
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:iconchewyraezen:
awww. what a sweet comment. thank you! :) :hug:
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~KikiElric Sep 7, 2012  Student General Artist
no need to thank me, you deserve it! you are one of the most talented writers I've ever seen! ^_^
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Mood: Joy ~cskadoz Sep 7, 2012   General Artist
this is a rewrite, right? :boogie: yeah, it flows. stern . . . strong. :headbang:
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~NarrativeNothing Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It has a raw flow and some really good imagery... I like it!
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:iconchewyraezen:
thanks Narrative Nothing. I appreciate you reading and commenting.
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Mood: Joy ~cskadoz Sep 7, 2012   General Artist
:sprint: . . . . . . :huggle:
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:iconchewyraezen:
sweet. thank you.
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